Monday, August 7, 2017

Stage 8 (Commentary on colleague's blog)

I agree strongly with Alex's opinions on net neutrality. It is a topic that I have paid attention to for a while now and one I believe will impact millions of people's lives. If the FCC is successful in removing net neutrality, it is very likely that other countries will follow suit, eliminating any chance of nonrestricted internet.

Alex does a good job of explaining the issue at hand by being very precise with things like dates, acts, website names and the name of the FCC chairman. It makes the article feel more credible because of how well informed the author is.

Another thing that Alex does well in this article is the ending. By using the word "we," he includes the reader in the fight for net neutrality and makes them apart of the cause. It inspires the reader to fight for net neutrality. 

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